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Very lovely image. You have very nice color choices.
You requested critique:
I feel that her torso is a bit long, the knees wouldn't be showing as it is now. If you removed some of the torso and brought the legs and dress bottom up you could keep the knees.
If you brought her right (our right) breast up a bit and added a bit of a rib cage bulge under the breast it would help define the torso more unless she is wearing a corset underneath as that tends to flatten things out and even make an hourglass shape.
Considering how soft everything else is I would suggest softening the outline on her neck, if it is embroidery I would still blur it a tad.
Lastly the picture is very nice, but the ornament cap is very weak. It looks like a light bulb base. There are many simple style caps as well as detailed ones: www.google.com/search?q=orname…
I feel the cap by itself would strengthen the feel of the whole piece.
You requested critique:
I feel that her torso is a bit long, the knees wouldn't be showing as it is now. If you removed some of the torso and brought the legs and dress bottom up you could keep the knees.
If you brought her right (our right) breast up a bit and added a bit of a rib cage bulge under the breast it would help define the torso more unless she is wearing a corset underneath as that tends to flatten things out and even make an hourglass shape.
Considering how soft everything else is I would suggest softening the outline on her neck, if it is embroidery I would still blur it a tad.
Lastly the picture is very nice, but the ornament cap is very weak. It looks like a light bulb base. There are many simple style caps as well as detailed ones: www.google.com/search?q=orname…
I feel the cap by itself would strengthen the feel of the whole piece.